Post Write Proposal

I have to say I think it came out pretty well, my only concerns are on format. Not just technical format, but the actual composition. I'll be completely honest, I wrote this late at night (or early morning depending on how you view it) I moved stuff around in the paper and it seemed to read well, but we'll have to see once I'm fully awake. I'm pretty sure I hit all the marks, problem, solution, concerns, benefits, sources.