Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Post Write - This I Believe

I think it came out... okay. I didn't really know what I believed and then this sappy little piece came out. I threw it together, since in my own thoughts I felt a belief essay should be written as it would be said not rehearsed and drafted. I'm a little worried about the style and format and whether this even works as a radio essay, since I've never done one. I know it's really corny, but aside from that does it do anything for anybody? Does it make sense to anyone but me?

2 comments:

Joel said...
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Joel said...

I liked it. The only thing that seemed off at first was the marriages part but it made sense after reading the following passages. I didn't think it was corny, maybe just a little in the end.

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